Harley said:
All GAFF goes here. I mean it. All of it.
Well, if you say so.
http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600080272&chapter=3
That is the URL to a Sonic rape fic called "Bloody Domination". In it, Shadow rapes and Cream, then kidnaps and rapes Amy. It's hard to explain, I'll just have to show you.
Terminus: Warning: I asked Harley to make Shadow really evil. So that's what he's going to be. If you don't like reading about torture and rape and gory murder, I advise you to click on the back button and read something else. Right now. In fact, leave this site altogether.
I don't like to miss putts, but yet I still golf.
Harley: If you think we're sick for writing this, if you feel your soul crumbling as you read it, if you find it as arousing as a boot to your sexual organs, if you say that Shadow is completely Out Of Character and would never do all this stuff… you're right!
If the author knows that Shadow is OOC, why does she continue to write him like that? I'm not about to say this would be good as an original fiction, but it would be a shade better.
So, some nut calls Sonic at his home and makes vague threats.
"Knuckles?" Sonic hazarded, "Is that you?"
"Don't be stupid, why would that dumbass red idiot call you?" the voice sneered.
Does Knuckles even have a phone?
"Mister Shadow? What are you doing?" Cream asked him, frightened as Shadow seized her. She lashed out at her assailant, trying to break free of his grip but to no avail, "Amy? Amy!"
So, Shadow drags Cream out of the store while Cream is yelling for help, in in a busy mall, in broad daylight, and nobody notices. The believability of that scenario is questionable.
There was a horrible squeak, and Cheese went limp as he crushed the neck of the little Chao in one hand, and then tossed it into a bin when nobody was looking.
He wasn't concerned that people were looking when he killed Cheese. He was concerned people would see him throwing Cheese into the can marked "Plastic".
Recycling is serious fucking business.
"You're lying, Mr. Shadow! They'll know I'm gone!" Cream wept, "They'll find me! Crime doesn't pay, didn't they teach you that in school?"
This raises an interesting question. Did Shadow ever go to school?
Guess what happens next? Shadow plays checkers with Cream.
Except replace "plays checkers with" with "rapes".
"I hope you've been saving up your screams," he leered, and began to force his length into her. Thanks to her being so young, it wasn't easy, but her tightness only excited him more, and he only pushed harder.
Right now, a 50+ year old hedgehog is raping a six year old rabbit. I just want to make that clear.
"You'll pay!" Cream wailed. "You'll be in prison until you die, and then you'll go straight down where all the bad people go!"
The penalty box? The mosh pit? Mexico?
Now he knew why there was a law against screwing little kids - if there wasn't, everybody would do it.
Lovely.
There isn't enough blood... the thought registered in the remains of his mind as he looked down at her, She screamed, but there wasn't enough blood... That thought completed, Shadow bent down and picked up Cream by her neck, "Now for my favourite part of the game," he hissed, picking up the short knife, "Sudden death." With that, he stabbed her.
A sudden death pun, that totally hasn't been done to death.
I'll skip ahead a couple of chapters and pick it back up at chapter six.
Harley: Now for degrading Rouge a bit. I really like that part.
Promising.
Rouge watched as her kill team took up their concealed positions outside the main room. Twenty crack GUN commandos lay in wait for Shadow. Rouge knew he was coming for her, and it was the perfect opportunity for an ambush. She had a plasma pistol and three knives concealed in her clothing. "Come on, Shadow," she whispered to herself. "We've been waiting for you."
Hasn't Shadow destroyed half the GUN army at one point or another? How are twenty little men supposed to stop him? That's like me trying to tackle Heath Miller.
Then he dropped into the large sewer beneath, and headed straight for Club Rouge. The sewers were the one place Rouge hadn't set alarms.
The dark hedgehog waded through sludge that was knee-deep, trying not to breathe through his nose, and found some pipes that led up, presumably to a sink or a toilet. Within a few seconds, he had punched his way up through the floor,
Yeah, he punched through metal, concrete, tile, and probably other stuff. His fist are like my legs, because I'm Chuck Norris.
He snatched up a huge meat cleaver, and curled up into a spin dash, shredding the body of the GUN soldier who came to investigate.
"Goddammit!" Rouge snarled, hearing the scream. She wasn't sure how Shadow had gotten in, but he had to be stopped now! "What are you waiting for?" she shouted at the twenty GUN troops, "Go get him!"
You mean the nineteen remaining soldiers, right?
An alarm sounded and twenty GUN soldiers burst into the room with guns drawn. Shadow just grinned. Even as the soldiers fired, he was already jumping. He homing attacked the first one and snatched up the dead man's sub-machine gun, grabbing a second in a headlock and using him as a human shield. He began firing rapidly at the soldiers. There were twenty of them and one of him, which basically meant that he was twenty times more likely to hit one of them than they were to hit him.
I wouldn't be so confident, dude. No matter how many you take out, there always seem to be twenty of them.
"You're coming with-" Suddenly the door burst open behind him and three GUN troops ran in, firing at him. He spun around, his gun firing wildly, destroying half the room as well as taking out the troops.
So, four of them fired at Shadow who was standing close to Rogue, and neither were hit? You know what GUN should teach their soldiers to do?
Aim.
Rouge felt him pull out her third knife. She was now unarmed, practically helpless against Shadow. She looked up into his burning red eyes with terror.
Yeah, totally helpless. Never mind she can kick through steel.
In desperation, she raised her head up and bit him.
This is at least the third time he has been bitten. You would think he would be more careful.
Rouge grunted as Shadow hit her in the back of her head. Her nose began to bleed from repeated blows.
Holy crap, he must be hitting her HARD in the back of the head to make her nose bleed.
Slowly and deliberately, Shadow carved words into Rouge's back with the knife, 'UL WOZ ERE' stood out in thin, spidery writing. He grinned, "Now everybody will know," he hissed.
His spelling is atrocious.
"That's what you get for messing with the Ultimate Lifeform, bitch," Shadow smirked, watching the blood pool. He bent over and began to lick it off her body, half-wishing she was alive to see it.
There are no words, only a headache.
The title for chapter eight my be the best chapter title I've ever heard. "Ninja Sex Scene". Just thinking of it causes me to laugh. Two people having sex so stealthily, neither of them know they're having sex with the other person.
It's also where Knuckles comes in, and where I have to leave. I need to sleep.
Except by "sleep", I mean "wait". Because that's what Chuck Norris does.
